Chapter 11 found HERE.
So, after my proclamation about how I kind of wish I hadn’t revealed that Ely had a sister and would rewrite the first chapters accordingly…
…I decided not to. It might be a bit more tedious for readers in the sense that y’all know what she’s searching for while she doesn’t, but […]
Chapter 10 located HERE.
In retrospect, it might have been better to cut chapter 0/1 and start with Ely waking up in the middle of nowhere, because as it stands, the readers know exactly what Ely’s forgetting, but Ely doesn’t, and I’m sure that’s frustrating… but at the same time, Chapters 0/1 are necessary to […]
Chapter 9 can be found HERE.
In this chapter: More backstorydump – a bit of insight into what kind of person Ely is, as well. Some of this is repeated information, but I tried to intersperse new details amidst the narration of the bits I’ve already revealed, to keep it fresh. Hopefully it worked.
On a […]
Chapter 8 can be found HERE
In this chapter: Even more infodump. Also backstory dump. For the record, volume 1 of SEly is going to be the infodump chapter. There are not going to be many major plot developments; I want to focus on establishing and fleshing out the setting.
Anyway, as always, if you enjoy […]
This chapter found HERE.
In This Chapter: Even more infodump. Next release will be backstorydump, and the release after that should be backstorydump too. Bear with me XD
Also, on another note, thanks to the efforts of Japzone, Lily Ex Machina is now available in EPUB FORMAT \o/ You can download it HERE.
Anyway, as always, […]
Today’s chapter found HERE!
Describing things in 1st Person is markedly different from doing the same in 3rd Person. It should probably be noted that my descriptions are done in a style that’s inspired by the Impressionist tradition – which, in all honesty, is one reason why I picked 1st Person for this story. What […]
This week’s chapter located HERE!
Those of you who’ve followed me from LxM would already know this, but this message is for the new people: this pacing should give you a taste of my writing style. I like to spend whole chapters describing a singular event, mostly because that’s just how I write. Can get […]