Today’s chapter found HERE!
Describing things in 1st Person is markedly different from doing the same in 3rd Person. It should probably be noted that my descriptions are done in a style that’s inspired by the Impressionist tradition – which, in all honesty, is one reason why I picked 1st Person for this story. What I tried to do in this chapter is to draw attention to the things Elysium notices, in the order she notices, in the hopes of creating a more nuanced and realistic picture of the situation – I’m not sure if I pulled it off well, though.
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